Bringing twins together

The lovely twins in the first picture are born in the Zuberi family lie in Pakistan; the others are living in UK. The relationship between them is set up by the SOS children’s village, which is the world’s largest orphan’s charity. The online story is showed by a parent of twins in the


http://www.soschildrensvillages.org.uk/charity-news/bringing-twins-together is telling us a special story that the twins in England are sponsoring two identical orphans in Pakistan.



From the content, the efforts and hardships are described in detail in the main passage. In addition, the warm-hearted emotions are revealed between the lines. We can feel the good hearts of the twins who are England but have a strong affinity with Pakistan. The article begins with the description of Sheena and Tania, who are not only biologically identical, but their lives have consistently followed a single path. As a truly remarkable history of ‘identicalness, both of them are excellent at study as well as work. The affinity about the Pakistan is exactly a connecting link between the preceding and the following. So the following parts are narrated the process of the sponsoring, which is impressive to the readers.



The structure, which depends on the content, is not as well as the content itself. Maybe the author’s emotion appeal is too obvious and intense, which makes the news’s structure’s level is not clear enough.



The two pictures are settled reasonably co-ordinately in the whole passage. Readers can be attracted in the first sight and interested in reading the story immediately, especially some of who are parents of twins as well as the author.



Actually, this is the second story of the SOS children’s village. When I analyse the two articles, the markedly advantage is that the links and related news are easily and expediently get access by the audiences. As the related articles are districted-based, readers can know about them more explicitly and purposely.



In a whole, the story works well despite of shortcomings. If you want to know more about the SOS children’s village, click the following website:

http://www.soschildrensvillages.org.uk/charity-news.