Children's charity gets a boost from sports awards

This is another news about children’s charity work from another website that paying much attention to this field. It was reported on 11th August 2010.

The first paragraph is in the black body because it summarizes the event in a general way. It is good for the readers who are always scanning the whole article instead of reading words one by one. It mentions that Hull Children's University will be the first organization to benefit from Hull and East Yorkshire (HEY) Sporting Heroes and Champions Awards' grant scheme. And then there is a picture showing that HSBC is founded.

The following paragraphs are talking about the process of the establishment of HSBC. How is the grant carried out? What is the specific situation during the process? Who has done the most of the event successfully? So many questions are answered in the several paragraphs.



About the relevant links, there is only one part which specifically showed the way to get access the related news. They are indicated by the date of the report; readers can also get access to news which is reported on the last few months.





It is special that the clock and search area is showed on the right side of the whole page. And the travel news is also can be linked in this news. But I don’t think it is a good way to set up the advantage of the website.



In summary, the news works despite of some disadvantages. Noting is perfect. If you want to know more about the HSBC, please click

http://www.hulltrains.co.uk/latestnews.php?id=292

SOS Haiti Emergency Appeal

Welcome to the SOS Children’s Village again. This time, I focus on the news “SOS Children Appealing for funds for Haiti Emergency”. The title has clearly explained what the author is going to say in the following page.


When I take my first sight on this news, the first thing I saw is the picture, which is showed in the left side of the online page. It tells us the area that the event has happened. The visualized and explicit image gives us the outline of the area.

The most mentionable point is that the links of the article are not only on the right side, but also among the lines of the news. For instance, the first sentence is “See also Latest Haiti earthquake news”, which is a useful link for this kind of news. There are other similar examples are to be found when readers begin to read.

The content of this article is showing the well established charity in Haiti (since 1978) , beginning from the second paragraph to the last paragraph. The important information and unimportant information is clearly being described. People can distinguish them easily when they read the words among the lines.

The last paragraph is attractive to people because of the new form of ending. It lists the examples of what a donation to SOS Children Haiti Emergency Relief could typically do. And the “Donate to Haiti” is easy to found in the bottom of the page.

If you want to pay attention the SOS children’s village, please click

http://www.emergency-appeal.org/haiti-earthquake/Haitiappeal

South Africa Continues Fight Against AIDS

I’ve read online news titled “South Africa Continues Fight Against AIDS” from the board of “Child charity news” in the webpage of “children’s village”, which focuses on children’s charity issue all over the world.




Which impressed me most on the webpage are two children who are keeping eyes out with expressions, like both of them are telling or begging for something from the warm world. As two simple phrases “Sponsor a child” and “33$ a month” showed under the photo obviously, I realized that only 33$ can save a pathetic child who is living in South Africa without clean water and sanitation at present. It’s certain that anyone with good heart who catches sight on this news will be sympathetic and likely to help them.



The whole article begins with a succinct foreword, indicating that the situation of AID infection in South Africa tends to be better, but still is a major challenge. It makes readers clearly know the general idea and the angle of the story. Then the following page tells us the state of affairs in the South Africa about the circumstances of HIV/AID, which is closely related to the mortality of kids, especially of who are under five years old. It is shocked and oppressive to realize the relentless fact is relentless.



It is evident that massive of figures are showed in the article to certify the conditions in the areas struggling with the devil of AID. The numbers as well as percentages in the sentences are properly proved the relationship between the AIDS and death, AIDS and birth.



The layout of the online story is better than others had been referred to in my blogs. From the arrange of the websites related to children’s charity to the colors of relevant news boards, almost everything is presenting the good design, making readers understand and get access to each stories well.



Therefore, please kick the following website of what I mentioned above:

http://www.soschildrensvillages.ca/News/News/child-charity-news/Pages/South-Africa-Fight-HIV-AIDS-403.aspx

Review on India must take responsibility for polio eradication

There is subhead under the title, saying that “When polio prevention is so simple, it is immoral for wealthy Indians to allow the virus a safe future”. So we can know that this online news is talking about the event related the polio in India. It is inferred that the author is complaining about the wealthy Indians who are selfish and indifferent to children’s charity.




The article is so long that readers may not likely to keep reading it. And the structure is not clear enough. But if you can keep on reading it, you’ll find that it really works.



The article begins with the author’s experience on the three different television programs in the US on the same day. And she thought they are linked in a troubling way. And then the author describes the three programs in details so as to make readers trust what she said and concern about what she is going to say in the following words. She summarizes these programs to tell us that polio is a tough problem that India faces, by narrating her opinions about the related events happened in both US and India.What she wants to say is clearly showed in this news. People can know that as soon as he finishes reading the whole page.



The links of this article are listed on the right side of the online page. And there are specific area that gives readers chances to express her or his own opinions after reading the story. We can see that readers’ reaction is strong with different ideas.



If you want to declare yourself on this issue, please click

http://www.guardian.co.uk/commentisfree/2010/oct/11/india-take-responsibility-polio-eradication

Review on “Sick Kids charity campaign closes”

This is a current event which was reported on Friday, 5 March 2010. The title is “Sick Kids charity campaign closes”, which indicates the main content of this news clearly and generally. It is easy and quick for those readers who usually scan over the topic to know the news. Also, this is a good way to make people understood the whole passage generally.




The first paragraph with black body shows us that it is important and worth reading. The 25words has told readers what happened, which is the key point and why it happened simply. A picture is showed to us accompanying with the whole passage. The major character has visualized in the picture to let readers know further.



The content of the online news is about the New Pyjamas campaign’s closing due to the investigation, and the result is that all 10 New Pyjamas staff will be made redundant. The key point of the whole story is that “the campaign would be unable to meet this target as costs were running far in excess of income”.



The structure is not good, although the content is full enough. Several of the quotes from the main characters are going through the whole page. It may cause the disorder when the readers are reading it. The summary and narration of the reporter are much fewer than the quotes.

The related links have added the goods for the online news. Because there are no more than 30 online pages can be get access to by the readers. The links are divided into several parts. It is worth mentioning that the related online pages are attractive to readers from different parts of the world, or are interested in kinds of charity events.



In a whole, this article doesn’t work effectively. If you are interested in this article, please

clickhttp://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/uk_news/scotland/edinburgh_and_east/8552501.stm.

Charity demands more cash for kids

“Charity demands more cash for kids”, when I see this title in the first sight, I am attracted to begin think about the content of the article. Maybe it is an article for raising money for children or it is calling for people’s attention for the orphans. Instead, this news is related to the current situation that children’s education is not working in North Ireland because of the privation.




The whole passage is narrating this situation by the quote from Fergus Cooper and the strong numbers. These methods make the article good tools to describe the condition exactly, in order to make readers believe it and got deep impress on it. Maybe it can evoke people’s awareness of concerning about poorest children’s poor situation on education.



The article is not like other ones related to charity about the kids’ education. It is succinct, simply and general. It only describes the fact in an impressed way. It makes sense with obvious effect. Readers may feel that they want to help the poor kids immediately when they read the article.



The structure is obvious and simple. Seven paragraphs make the whole text clear and succinct, the last paragraph has summarized the whole article in a special way, using the words that Mr. Cooper said before. There is massive online news that most reviewed in education. People can read the others quickly. The disadvantage of the news is that there are no pictures or images. Readers may fell bald when they read the news.



If you are interested in this one, please click

http://www.belfasttelegraph.co.uk/news/education/charity-demands-more-cash-for-kids-14972816.html

Bringing twins together

The lovely twins in the first picture are born in the Zuberi family lie in Pakistan; the others are living in UK. The relationship between them is set up by the SOS children’s village, which is the world’s largest orphan’s charity. The online story is showed by a parent of twins in the


http://www.soschildrensvillages.org.uk/charity-news/bringing-twins-together is telling us a special story that the twins in England are sponsoring two identical orphans in Pakistan.



From the content, the efforts and hardships are described in detail in the main passage. In addition, the warm-hearted emotions are revealed between the lines. We can feel the good hearts of the twins who are England but have a strong affinity with Pakistan. The article begins with the description of Sheena and Tania, who are not only biologically identical, but their lives have consistently followed a single path. As a truly remarkable history of ‘identicalness, both of them are excellent at study as well as work. The affinity about the Pakistan is exactly a connecting link between the preceding and the following. So the following parts are narrated the process of the sponsoring, which is impressive to the readers.



The structure, which depends on the content, is not as well as the content itself. Maybe the author’s emotion appeal is too obvious and intense, which makes the news’s structure’s level is not clear enough.



The two pictures are settled reasonably co-ordinately in the whole passage. Readers can be attracted in the first sight and interested in reading the story immediately, especially some of who are parents of twins as well as the author.



Actually, this is the second story of the SOS children’s village. When I analyse the two articles, the markedly advantage is that the links and related news are easily and expediently get access by the audiences. As the related articles are districted-based, readers can know about them more explicitly and purposely.



In a whole, the story works well despite of shortcomings. If you want to know more about the SOS children’s village, click the following website:

http://www.soschildrensvillages.org.uk/charity-news.