Charity demands more cash for kids

“Charity demands more cash for kids”, when I see this title in the first sight, I am attracted to begin think about the content of the article. Maybe it is an article for raising money for children or it is calling for people’s attention for the orphans. Instead, this news is related to the current situation that children’s education is not working in North Ireland because of the privation.




The whole passage is narrating this situation by the quote from Fergus Cooper and the strong numbers. These methods make the article good tools to describe the condition exactly, in order to make readers believe it and got deep impress on it. Maybe it can evoke people’s awareness of concerning about poorest children’s poor situation on education.



The article is not like other ones related to charity about the kids’ education. It is succinct, simply and general. It only describes the fact in an impressed way. It makes sense with obvious effect. Readers may feel that they want to help the poor kids immediately when they read the article.



The structure is obvious and simple. Seven paragraphs make the whole text clear and succinct, the last paragraph has summarized the whole article in a special way, using the words that Mr. Cooper said before. There is massive online news that most reviewed in education. People can read the others quickly. The disadvantage of the news is that there are no pictures or images. Readers may fell bald when they read the news.



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http://www.belfasttelegraph.co.uk/news/education/charity-demands-more-cash-for-kids-14972816.html